What you need to do is go back to your Deja Vu and Tanaka Store sound bites and look to those first. Those are the established, long time businesses that really are not mentioned here hardly at all. You mention Rainbeau Jo's a lot and Tamba but the clips you've chosen don't really back up what you are trying to say. The point about adapting where you use Tamba....the clip you have from him says nothing about what they are doing to adapt to the big box stores coming here. He mentions something new is always fresh. So what? What does that mean? Your points I think are ok, but you need to better select sound bites that support them.