Going through so many revisions has certainly helped your script. That's why I always recommend that students try to get in as many revisions as they can to work out the kinks in the story. I think this is a nicely done script that provides the viewer with the story about what a biomass plant is, why it was created here on Kauai, how it started, and how it works. Nice job! I noticed you decided to trim some things out in this last revision. I think that was a wise choice as the story needed to be trimmed a little. Being able to interview the Mayor was huge as it gave your story validity from our local government. The only thing I can say that concerns me about this story is that it is more like a feature in the sense that there doesn't seem to be a negative side to this, at least none that I can see. There are so many positives to this. Hold on, I found another....you mention how this plant will not pollute our island and our water but there seems to be nothing in your sound bites after that VO to explain that.
Overall, a very nice job in your revisions to turn out a well written script! 3.9 out of 4.