Overall this video does a pretty good job at telling us the story about the guy you never see in front of the camera but who has taken thousands and thousands of photos. The story flows well from point to point but early on I can see black screens which means you don't have your clips fully touching each other in the timeline in Final Cut. Some of the shots need some color correcting done to them as they are super bright and washed out. His interview is off to the side a little too much. Audio levels are also not very even and need work. Be careful about using b-roll more than once. I can see a few times in which you used the same clips twice. I think your b-roll background audio in some instances needs to be louder. No clip should be totally silent. A few b-roll clips should be moved around for better consistency too. Kudos to you for getting a variety of b-roll shots of him at various events on the island. In moving them around, I think if you kept the football shots together and the basketball shots together instead of spreading them out it would be more consistent. Your VOs are done well and are at a good pace. I like the opening of the Mayor describing him but it tends to be a little too long. 3.65 points.