The editing between that wide shot or Mom looking around to the next close up of her needs to be trimmed. When she looks left in the wide, when you cut to the close up, she should then be turning to look the other way. See me if you need me to explain this. Watch out because your levels are too high for the audio at the end. Also the shot where we talk about the movie and Micah responds, that next shot jumps like a jump cut. Try and swap the titles and VOs so that the family message is first. Let's see how that one is with "Put Electronics Away" as the final title. That's really your message.